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Undying Love part 1


I'm trying to check my email when all of a sudden I see a dark figure emerge from the forest next to my house and start walking toward my bedroom window. I don't know who or what it is so I start to walk slowly towards my window. I feel my heart skip a beat when I see who it is: my boyfriend Connor.
Opening my window, I shout," Connor Hart, what are you doing here? You nearly scared me to death!"
"Trying to get as close to you as I can Isobel Vega." Connor says with a wryly smile that almost makes me melt in bliss.
"Come in, I need to tell you something." I nearly whisper opening my window wider and motioning for him to come in. How could I possibly tell him what I need to without worry? Connors tan skin was so visible even in the dark moonlight I could see his ocean blue eyes as it shines in the starry night. His light brown hair was moving in the late night breeze, he makes my knees weak with temptation.
I sigh when he climbs in through my window with that beautiful bright smile on his face. I can't believe how long I've waited for this to happen and it finally has. If it weren't for this, I'd have my fairytale ending and Connor and I would stay happy... Together. "Connor I need to tell you something important."I say in a hurried whisper.
"I have something to say too. Isobel, I love you and I always will. I've loved you since the moment I laid my eyes on you."
"That just makes this all the more harder." my voice is thick and nearly cracking. I feel as if I'm on the verge of tears."Connor, my dad says we're moving to Oregon. If it were my choice I'd never leave you, I'd stay by your side forever." Tears are now freely streaming down my face. I feel so guilty saying this after he proclaims his love.
"Don't cry, we can make this work for the better." He says trying his best to sooth me even though he's barely hanging on himself.
"Connor, don't be stupid, long distance relationships never work out for the best." My words are barely understandable through the sounds of my sobbing. I just wish there was another way for us to be together so badly.
"You don't know that Isobel, you never know what might happen. I'll call you every day and night; I'll never forget you... While you're still here let's try and have some fun to take our minds off of it, we can try and see what we can do to change their minds."Connor sounds so desperate to keep me.
"Connor, you are the most incredibly sweet guy I've ever met, and probably the only one I'll ever love, but this will never work out." I try and look in to his churning stormy blue eyes but can't seem to find them when I look. I nearly cry out again just by the look of misery and pain on his face.
He silently reaches out and pulls me in to a tight embrace and rests his head on mine. After a while I break our hug feeling the calming affect it has on my mind and body. Just the intoxicating sent of him enclosing me is enough to put me in a trance like I could never get enough of that smell of pine, cedar and a slight tinge of mint.
I feel so drowsy so I put my cheek on his shoulder and just close my eyes and rest there for a few minutes. Connor slowly eases me off and puts my head on my pillow and tucks me in. After he tucks me in I open my eyes a little only to see him still sitting on my bed with his eyes closed and breathing deeply and slowly. I feel my consciousness slip away and the last thing I see is Connor move towards me and kiss my forehead goodnight.
Hi everybody! This is my first story I'm creating on DA. I'd like to thank my friends who are and aren't on DA but helped me edit the first chapter:
~bluesun265
~awesome1144
and that's about it. I might add and edit to make it longer or fix anything that I missed. I would really appreciate critique on this and just plain old comments:D
Picture: :iconrockgem: [link]
* *edited slightly on PS cs5**
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TheCarmiBug Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww! omg its really good! :D
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victorianqueen1900 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I had to get all the romance and lovey dovey stuff out of my system:) the next chapter is from Connor's point of view:D
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TheCarmiBug Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cant wait to read it ;)
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AliceKKT Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011   Photographer
I think it's amazing!
I love how you kept it present, but made it sound like the past.
You are definatly talented.
It's so sweet and I can't wait to read the rest :D
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fobosanddemos235 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011
Awww.....I love it hun! :)
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victorianqueen1900 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks:D I had to write something to get out the romance in my system;)
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fobosanddemos235 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011
Lol well its good ;)
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